"Wonderful description of the "LA Scene," but even more of the single life, as well as people's psychological makeup. It is an engrossing work, and thoroughly enjoyable to read. While J. Cafefin's other writings, Reverb, and the short stories, are all very good, Disconnected is the best piece yet."
--IsaacofYork, Scribd Review
"I dont usually like romance type stories, but this excellent writing. The plot is seamless. The scenes are believable, the action moves the story along, the transitions are very good. The characters actions and reactions to events and in dialog are believable and accessible. The foreshadowing is great! I love the setting--a perfect place/context for a person to feel that disconnect and loneliness. I look forward to reading more."
--Tina, Urbis Review
"Being a hard subject to tackle with tact, Id be inclined to give J. Cafesin a high five for marks. The conversations conveyed a myriad of subjects that really did show the sadness of the entire situation. Self loathing is indeed a tricky concept to write about, but Id say the author did a fantastic job."
--eulogyforthesun, Urbis Review
"Kate's emotional lonliness and feeling of self hoplessness is portrayed with graphic excellence. Whilst reading, I got a real sense of her futility. Such a waste of life, when all she needed was distraction, and she wouldn't allow it. Love gone sadly wrong. Overall, it works well. No real problems with the mechanics of the writing. Author gets the emotion across really well, it is truly believable."
--kadiya, Urbis Review
"Most people will view this as controversial because of the topic of which it speaks. There is a fairly large group that will understand and connect with the topic. The writing, in and of itself is very good and the imagetry is excellent."
--Ravage6863, Urbis Review
"The voice of this narrator is real-- I KNOW this girl! This piece left me curious for more of the story, more of Kate's life. I would love to see this book!"
--firemaidenphoenix, Urbis Review
"It is amazing details, bold choice of words, love the setting, the characters and there personalities. I love the theme of the whole story. Just keep working on it and I can't wait to see it on the shelves in a book store."
--mz tory, WDC Review
"Disconnected is driven like the Hollywood Freeway after midnight, fast, engaging, and peppered with many poignant insights. It's an L.A. story, a modern romance with an edge, like the city itself."
--Chopstix, WDC Review
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